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Hexapodous . . . o O o . . . Quadrupedal
MAMMAL [illegible] enclosure - NOT FOR DISPLAY - DO NOT LIFT
Feeding 3xd Water 4xd
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9am PLENARY SESSION Welcome and thoughts on the rapid growth of our field (A. Solano)
10am Do Not Disturb: Climatic perturbation and its effects on lower primates (D. Ross)
12pm Environmental triggers for old-age syndrome in moles (J. Thorson)
2pm The Stuttering Cow! What adaptation really tells us (F. Berstein, D.  Carroll)
4pm A review of recent changes in international animal policy (guest L.  Sung, Esq.)
6pm Informal reception for new MSZS members; close of day 1

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ANARCHY IS THE ANSWER FREE IT UP
What does the Bible say about feminism?

... really loved me you would have taken down the
... better for morale than anything those jackholes in Annapolis ever
... repeatedly, like very very repeatedly, I just hope
... pistachio, okay, caramel, two, fudge, get me at least as
... excuse me sir, but this park closes at

Delicious new flavor * E-Z travel dispenser
HEAVY - _17_ pounds over allowance - FREIGHT PAID
Undulating Western Snakes ADVANCE REVIEW COPY
Twin pull rear derailleur / CLEARANCE - May not be RETURNED or EXCHANGED once open
Safe to use on bites and stings
EVERYONE RESPECTS YOUR PATIENCE IN A BAD SITUATION * LUCKY NUMBERS 3, 11, 26, 30

written for Claire Woods in the big room 9/12/04

I credit myself with realizing this concept would be better if it were executed realistically, except that I only realized it after the first few lines were written. I didn't have anything in mind with that first line; it just sounded good and I was irritated at myself that I hadn't started yet.

Other problems: The fourth section isn't particularly interesting. I wanted to do something more concrete to keep myself honest (i.e. to commit myself to a particular idea about what was going on) but...

And then there's the problem that I know nothing about Mississippi college campuses, and that the sixth section, which I intended as overheard snippets of conversation, wouldn't count as "seen".

I guess I would say that I'm happy with what I got when I explored the idea, but not especially thrilled with the final execution. Back when I used to do these more often I had a whole set of ideas about the difference between improv writing and conventional writing which I no longer remember well enough to judge the relevance of.

Anyway, part of the deal here is "results vary". I look forward to giving this another coat of paint. And I was so out of practice that I *forgot* I was allowed to use words implicitly, not just verbatim. That would have made "perturb" easier.

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